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Jun 18 2025

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Thank you to everyone who participated in our Book Review Competition!
We were truly impressed by the insight, creativity, and passion shown in all the submissions.
After careful review, we are excited to announce the winners.

🎉 Congratulations to all the winners, and once again, thank you to everyone who took part!

Full NameGradeBranch
Isaac Chen6Castle Hill
Md Tamkeen Islam Zaarab6Liverpool
Abdullah Moazzam5Randwick
Jayden Jung5Strathfield
Austin Sony Menachery4Adelaide SA
Shamidha Padhi4Cabramatta
Abdulqadir Ramay3Hurstville
Megan Louis3Strathfield
Yiguo Chen2Strathfield
[ Year 6 ] Isaac ChenWriting Review
[ Student: Isaac Chen ]
Book Review: The Merry Adventures of Robin Hood by Howard Pyle

Introduction Howard Pyle’s The Merry Adventures of Robin Hood (1883) is one of the most enduring and beloved retellings of the legendary outlaw’s tales. Written in a vivid, engaging style and beautifully illustrated by Pyle himself, this book has shaped modern perceptions of Robin Hood as a noble bandit who steals from the rich to give to the poor. With its blend of humor, adventure, and moral storytelling, Pyle’s work remains a cornerstone of classic literature and a must-read for lovers of historical adventure.

Summary of the Story Pyle’s narrative follows Robin Hood and his band of Merry Men—Little John, Friar Tuck, Will Scarlet, and others—as they defy the corrupt Sheriff of Nottingham and Prince John’s unjust rule. Each chapter presents a self-contained episode of Robin Hood’s daring escapades, whether outwitting powerful lords, besting rivals in archery contests, or aiding oppressed villagers. The book captures the spirit of camaraderie, justice, and rebellion against tyranny, all wrapped in a tone of lighthearted adventure.

Analysis and Themes One of the most remarkable aspects of Pyle’s Robin Hood is how it balances heroism with moral complexity. The book does not merely glorify outlawry; instead, it frames Robin Hood’s defiance as a response to an unjust system. Several key themes emerge:
▪️ Justice vs. Law – Robin Hood breaks the law, but his actions serve a higher moral purpose, challenging the corrupt aristocracy.
▪️ Brotherhood and Loyalty – The Merry Men’s deep friendship and commitment to their cause create a strong sense of unity.
▪️ Chivalry and Honor – Robin Hood upholds his own code of conduct, treating women with respect, fighting fairly, and showing mercy to worthy opponents.

Pyle’s prose is lively, infused with archaic yet accessible English that evokes the medieval setting without alienating modern readers. His Robin Hood is not just a rogue but a noble-hearted leader, a sharp contrast to some earlier ballads where he was depicted as a rougher, more self-serving character.

Strengths of the Book
1. Rich, Poetic Language – Pyle’s old-fashioned yet musical writing style adds to the book’s charm, making it feel like a true medieval tale.
2. Illustrations by the Author – Pyle’s own illustrations bring the characters and settings to life, enhancing the storytelling.
3. Memorable Characters – Each of Robin’s companions has a distinct personality, adding humor and depth to the stories.
4. Engaging Episodic Structure – The book is easy to pick up and read in segments, making it perfect for young readers and those new to the Robin Hood legend.

Criticisms While Pyle’s Robin Hood is a masterpiece, it does have some drawbacks:
▪️ Dated Language – Though charming, the faux-medieval English can be difficult for younger or modern readers.
▪️ Romanticized View of Outlaw Life – The hardships of living as an outlaw are glossed over in favor of adventure and merriment.
▪️ Lack of Deep Character Development – Because the book is structured as a series of adventures rather than a novel with an overarching plot, characters do not undergo significant development.

Final Verdict Howard Pyle’s The Merry Adventures of Robin Hood is a timeless classic that captures the spirit of one of literature’s greatest folk heroes. With its thrilling escapades, humor, and vivid storytelling, it remains the definitive introduction to the legend of Robin Hood. Though the language may challenge some readers, those who persevere will be rewarded with a rich and entertaining journey into medieval England. Whether you are revisiting a childhood favorite or discovering Robin Hood for the first time, this book is an essential read for lovers of adventure, folklore, and heroism.
 
[ Year 6 ] Md Tamkeen Islam ZaarabWriting Review
[ Student: Md Tamkeen Islam Zaarab ]
Book Review: Robin Hood

Introduction
Robin Hood is a legendary tale of an outlaw who robs from the rich and gives to the poor. The story has been retold in various versions over centuries, with origins in English folklore. Some of the most famous adaptations include Howard Pyle’s The Merry Adventures of Robin Hood (1883) and Roger Lancelyn Green’s The Adventures of Robin Hood (1956). The tale of Robin Hood has remained a staple of adventure literature, capturing the imagination of readers young and old.

Plot Summary
The story follows Robin Hood, a nobleman-turned-outlaw, who takes refuge in Sherwood Forest after being declared an outlaw by the corrupt Sheriff of Nottingham. Along with his band of Merry Men, including Little John, Friar Tuck, and Will Scarlet, Robin Hood engages in daring adventures, ambushing tax collectors and redistributing their wealth to the poor. He often outwits the Sheriff and other enemies, while maintaining his loyalty to the rightful king, Richard the Lionheart, who has been away on the Crusades.

Themes
▪️Justice and Heroism: Robin Hood is a symbol of justice, challenging the oppression of the ruling class. His actions, though technically unlawful, are driven by a moral code that seeks fairness for the poor.
▪️Bravery and Loyalty: Robin and his men show courage in the face of danger, especially in their dedication to King Richard.
▪️Friendship and Brotherhood: The camaraderie among the Merry Men is a key aspect of the story, highlighting themes of loyalty and teamwork.
▪️Corruption and Tyranny: The Sheriff of Nottingham and Prince John represent corrupt rulers who exploit the common people, reinforcing the idea of resisting injustice.

Writing Style and Impact
The writing style of classic versions like Howard Pyle’s The Merry Adventures of Robin Hood is rich and engaging, featuring old-fashioned English and humorous storytelling. The book is filled with action, wit, and moral lessons, making it a delightful read for both children and adults.
The story of Robin Hood has influenced literature, film, and popular culture, inspiring countless adaptations and interpretations. It continues to resonate as a tale of heroism and social justice.

Conclusion
Robin Hood remains a timeless classic, blending adventure, humor, and a strong moral message. Whether read in its original form or through modern retellings, the legend of the outlaw who fights for the common people is as captivating as ever. It is a must-read for fans of folklore, historical fiction, and adventure stories.
[ Year 5 ] Abdullah MoazzamWriting Review
[ Student: Abdullah Moazzam ]
The Secret Garden

The book I will discuss is called “The Secret Garden,” authored by Frances Hodgson Burnett. This story follows Mary Lennox on her journey to discover the secret garden.
The first main character is Mary Lennox. She was described as a girl with a thin face, a slender body, light hair, and a sour expression. Initially, she was portrayed as arrogant and contrary, but by the end of the story, she became caring and kind toward others. In the beginning, Mary lacked interest in her surroundings because she had always been cared for by an Ayah. However, as the story progressed, she developed a passion for gardening, particularly while working alongside Martha’s brother, Dickon Sowerby. Mary’s character transformed from being self-centered to becoming more considerate, ultimately revealing her kind-heartedness.

The next character is Dickon Sowerby. He had chubby cheeks, red hair, and blue eyes, and he was often described as a “Yorkshire terrier angel.” Dickon was compassionate and caring toward those around him, regardless of their background. He shared Mary’s interest in gardening, and together, they formed a strong friendship by the end of the story.

Another important character is Colin Craven. Colin was a young boy with pale skin, blue eyes, short brown hair, and a frail physique. He was very sick and bedridden until Mary arrived and began keeping him company. Over time, he improved and eventually learned to walk on his own in the secret garden. Although he was initially demanding and inflexible due to his illness, he became more adaptable as the story unfolded.

Lastly, we have Ben Weatherstaff. He was an experienced gardener, portrayed as an elderly man with a grumpy demeanor and a formal Yorkshire accent. Ben was passionate about gardening and enjoyed planting various flowers, including daffodils, roses, and sunflowers. While he tended to get annoyed when people asked too many questions, he was always willing to lend a helping hand. Additionally, he had a red-breasted robin that helped Mary find the secret garden.

The story was set in Misselthwaite Manor, located in the North York Moors of England. It began with Mary, whose parents died from cholera, a contagious disease. After their death, she was sent to live with an English clergyman near her home. Eventually, Mary grew weary of being around her guardians and decided to leave for Mr. Archibald Craven’s house. She embarked on this journey with Ms. Medlock, the head of the servants at Misselthwaite Manor. Upon her arrival, she stayed with Martha, the housemaid, since everyone else was too busy to attend to her. Martha introduced the idea of a secret garden to Mary but did not reveal its location, sparking Mary’s curiosity.

Eager to find the secret garden, Mary embarked on a quest that led her to stumble into Ben Weatherstaff’s garden, only to be disappointed to discover that it was not the secret garden she sought. She heard an unusual crying sound and went to ask Martha about it. Martha told her to “shake it off,” which piqued Mary’s interest. A few days later, unable to go outside, Mary decided to explore the many hidden rooms of the manor. She heard the wailing sound again and decided to investigate. However, she accidentally turned the wrong corner and encountered Ms. Medlock, who was furious and sent her back to her room. Mary was enraged for a few days, but once she returned to the outside world, Ben’s Robin helped her find the key to the secret garden.

Over the next few days, the robin also guided her to the location of the secret garden. When Mary first saw the garden, she was impressed by the beautiful flowers, though she noticed that many were dying due to being overgrown. Mary decided to help in the garden. After taking in this unbelievable sight, she strolled through the garden and met Dickon Sowerby. They formed a close bond, and when Mary came back, she asked Martha for some gardening tools. Martha told her to ask Dickon for what they needed. Together, they worked in the garden for several days until Archibald called for her, and with courage, she asked if she could use the manor’s land for gardening, to which he replied yes.

One night, Mary woke up hearing the eerie wailing sound and was shocked to find Colin. He was initially selfish and unkind, not considerate of anyone else. They spent 1-3 hours together, forming a bond. The next day, Mary was so excited to meet Dickon that she had completely forgotten about Colin. He became angry and shouted at her when she returned, which raised her contrary nature, leading to a terrible tantrum. Mary decided to settle the matter by promising to show him the concealed garden.

A few days later, everyone was shocked to see that Colin, who had always been bedridden, now woke up to see the secret garden for himself. After talking with Dickon, he became determined to believe that he was no longer doomed to be a hunchback. After the visit, the three found out that Ben tended to the secret garden in remembrance of Mrs. Craven. He decided to help the children keep it a secret. After that day, Colin started to use his wheelchair less and less. One day, he and Mary decided to embark on a great adventure in the sealed-shut rooms because the 2 could not go outside. He finds that in his room, there is a portrait showing his mother’s wonderful face. He interprets that his mother is happy that he is cured because of magic. Soon his father approaches him and he sees that Colin is playing with other children. He decides to show his father the secret garden and the minute details. Colin gives up his wheelchair so that he can walk like another boy in Yorkshire.
The moral of the story is to keep going no matter what awaits you. This is portrayed by Mary helping Colin to stay alive, even though Colin is pessimistic. In the end, he can stay alive with the help of Mary’s new personality.

The book is well-written, featuring sophisticated vocabulary and varied sentence structures, along with suspenseful content. The organization of the narrative is highly commendable and has truly touched my heart. I would rate this book a perfect 10/10. It is very exciting, especially since the chapters often end on cliffhangers that leave you wanting more. The introduction of the character Colin further piqued my interest in the story. The author skillfully uses intriguing and sometimes challenging words to engage readers. There are very few illustrations, as the writing encourages you to create mental images through vivid imagery. The illustrations that are present enhance the story in parts where imagery is less effective. This combination enriches the reading experience, allowing you to visualize every aspect of the narrative. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys imaginative stories, particularly those who appreciate fantasy and suspense genres.
[ Year 5 ] Jayden JungWriting Review
[ Student: Jayden Jung ]
“The Secret Garden” by Frances Hodgson Burnett remains a beloved classic, its enduring appeal rooted in its exploration of transformation, healing, and the profound connection between humanity and nature. The narrative centers on Mary Lennox, a neglected and disagreeable child orphaned in India and subsequently sent to the austere Misselthwaite Manor in Yorkshire. This imposing estate, shrouded in grief and isolation, mirrors the inner turmoil of its inhabitants, particularly Mary’s reclusive uncle, Archibald Craven. As Mary ventures into the manor’s expansive grounds, she stumbles upon a hidden, walled garden, locked and neglected for a decade, setting in motion a journey of both personal and botanical restoration.

The garden serves as a powerful metaphor for the characters’ internal landscapes. As Mary, with the assistance of the nature-loving Dickon Sowerby and her sickly cousin Colin Craven, begins to revive the dormant garden, they simultaneously cultivate their own emotional and physical well-being. Mary’s transformation from a sullen and ill-tempered child to a vibrant and compassionate young girl is central to the story, showcasing the potential for personal growth even in the face of adversity. Colin’s journey from a bedridden and self-pitying invalid to a healthy and energetic boy further underscores the novel’s emphasis on the restorative power of positive change. Even Mr. Craven, consumed by grief, experiences a form of healing, emerging from his self-imposed isolation as the garden and the children bloom.

Burnett masterfully portrays the therapeutic influence of the natural world. The vivid descriptions of the Yorkshire moors and the burgeoning garden immerse the reader in the beauty and vitality of nature. Dickon, with his innate understanding of the natural world, acts as a conduit between the children and their surroundings, embodying the novel’s central theme of nature’s restorative power. The story also delves into the complexities of childhood, highlighting the impact of neglect, isolation, and grief. It emphasizes the importance of friendship, compassion, and the power of positive thinking, showcasing the children’s journey of self-discovery as they learn to overcome their limitations and embrace life.

Beyond its focus on individual transformation, “The Secret Garden” subtly addresses social issues of its time, including class differences and the importance of empathy. The contrast between Mary’s privileged but neglected upbringing in India and the simple, nature-centered life of the Sowerby family highlights these social distinctions. Burnett’s literary style, characterized by its vivid descriptions, engaging narrative, and heartfelt emotion, further enhances the novel’s impact. Her skillful use of symbolism and imagery effectively conveys the story’s themes, while the Yorkshire dialect adds authenticity and charm. Ultimately, “The Secret Garden” remains a timeless tale that celebrates the resilience of the human spirit and the transformative power of nature, offering a message of hope and renewal that resonates with readers of all ages.
[ Year 4 ] Austin Sony MenacheryWriting Review
[ Student: Austin Sony Menachery ]
Overview
Published in 1894, The Jungle Book is a collection of stories written by Rudyard Kipling, set in the Indian jungle. The book follows the journey of a young boy named Mowgli, who is raised by wolves and must navigate the dangers of the jungle while learning valuable lessons about loyalty, friendship, and the importance of staying true to oneself.

Plot
The story begins with the introduction of Mowgli, a human infant found and adopted by a pack of wolves. As Mowgli grows up, he is trained by the wolves and learns the ways of the jungle from the wise and loyal Baloo the bear and the panther Bagheera. However, Mowgli’s presence in the jungle is soon discovered by the villainous tiger Shere Khan, who seeks to destroy him.
 
Themes
▪️ Identity: Mowgli’s journey is a metaphor for the struggle to find one’s identity and place in the world. As a human raised by wolves, Mowgli must navigate the complexities of his mixed heritage and learn to accept himself for who he is.
▪️ Loyalty: The story highlights the importance of loyalty and friendship in the face of adversity. Mowgli’s relationships with Baloo, Bagheera, and the wolves demonstrate the power of loyalty and the impact it can have on one’s life.
▪️ Survival: The jungle is a harsh and unforgiving environment, and Mowgli must use his wits and resourcefulness to survive. The story teaches valuable lessons about adaptability, perseverance, and the importance of staying true to oneself.

Style and Structure
Kipling’s writing style is characterized by his use of vivid imagery, clever wordplay, and a deep understanding of the natural world. The stories are structured around the idea of a “jungle code,” where animals live by a set of rules and norms that govern their behavior.

Impact and Legacy
The Jungle Book has had a profound impact on popular culture, inspiring numerous adaptations and interpretations, including films, stage productions, and even a Disney animated movie. The book’s themes of identity, loyalty, and survival continue to resonate with readers of all ages, making it a timeless classic of children’s literature.

Impact and Legacy
The Jungle Book has had a profound impact on popular culture, inspiring numerous adaptations and interpretations, including films, stage productions, and even a Disney animated movie. The book’s themes of identity, loyalty, and survival continue to resonate with readers of all ages, making it a timeless classic of children’s literature.
 
Conclusion
In conclusion, The Jungle Book is a captivating and thought-provoking tale that has captivated readers for generations. With its rich characters, vivid settings, and timeless themes, the book is a must-read for anyone interested in adventure, self-discovery, and the human condition.
 
[ Year 4 ] Shamidha PadhiWriting Review
[ Student: Shamidha Padhi ]
Book Review: The Jungle Book
 
1. Book Summary

The Jungle Book is written and illustrated by Rudyard Kipling and was first published in 1894. The book combines adventure, animal fables, and coming-of-age tales. It blends fantasy with moral storytelling, often through animal characters that reflect human traits and values.

There is a diverse range of characters across the stories. Here’s a sneak peek of the most loved characters in Mowgli’s stories:

▪️ Mowgli is a young boy raised by wolves in the jungle. He is brave, curious, and deeply connected to the animals. Mowgli is clever and resourceful, often showing wisdom beyond his years.
▪️ Bagheera is a sleek, black panther who acts like a mentor to Mowgli. He is wise, serious, and protective.
▪️ Baloo is a large, lazy and kind-hearted bear who teaches Mowgli the Law of the Jungle. He’s funny, lovable, and a bit of a free-spirited character.
▪️ Shere Khan is the main antagonist – a fierce tiger who wants to kill Mowgli. He is proud, dangerous, and sees humans as a threat.
▪️ Kaa is a giant python who can hypnotise others. He’s both a threat and a helper at different points in the stories.
▪️ The Wolf Pack is significant, especially Akela, the leader. They accept Mowgli as one of their own and raise him as a cub.

The story is set in the Indian jungle, full of lush trees, rivers, and wild animals. The jungle is both beautiful and dangerous, serving as the main backdrop for most of the adventures.

The Jungle Book is a collection of timeless stories, but the most famous ones follow Mowgli, the “man-cub” raised by wolves. He learns jungle laws, makes friends and enemies, and eventually must decide where he truly belongs—among the animals or with humans. The book also includes other animal stories like ‘Rikki-Tikki-Tavi’ (a brave mongoose) and ‘Toomai of the Elephants’.

 Each story has a different moral to it. Here are a few examples:
▪️ The importance of loyalty, courage, and respect for nature.
▪️ That laws and rules (even in the jungle) help create harmony.
▪️ That growing up means learning who you are and where you belong.

2. Personal Opinion

The book is beautifully written. Kipling’s language is rich and vivid, making the jungle feel alive. His use of animal characters to explore human emotions and values is both clever and meaningful.

The book is extremely exciting! It’s full of action, suspense, and survival. Mowgli’s encounters with Shere Khan and other jungle creatures keep the reader on edge. Even the quieter moments are filled with emotional depth.

Kipling uses poetic language, songs, and jungle phrases that make the book unique. Some words may seem old-fashioned today, but they add to the charm.

The Jungle Book includes beautiful illustrations of the animals and jungle scenes. These illustrations help bring the characters to life and are especially helpful for younger readers.

I would certainly recommend this novel! It’s a classic that has stood the test of time. I would propose it to:
▪️ Children aged 9 and up, especially those who love animals and adventure.
▪️ Adults who enjoy classic literature and rich storytelling.
▪️ It’s also a great book for parents and teachers to read aloud or discuss with kids.

The Jungle Book is more than just a children’s story—it’s a powerful tale about identity, nature, and growing up. With unforgettable characters, exciting adventures, and deep morals, it’s a must-read for all ages.
[ Year 3 ] Abdulqadir RamayWriting Review
[ Student: Abdulqadir Ramay ]
2025 Term 1 Book Review:
Bowser the Hound by Thornton W. Burgess

The title of the book is Bowser the Hound written by Thornton W. Burgess. This story is an animal adventure with animal characters who can speak to each other.
The main character is Bowser the Hound. He is a brave and strong bull hound dog with a loud voice and a very strong sense of smell. He likes to chase around Old man Coyote, Reddy Fox, and Granny fox. Bowser is an impulsive dog which led him to getting lost in the forest. He is also very loyal to Farmer Brown’s Boy and is trying to get back to him and his nice and cosy dog house. 
Other important characters:
Old Man Coyote is a nasty trickster who is the opposite of Bowser. He is a clever coyote who schemes to get rid of Bowser so he can do whatever he pleases in Farmer Brown’s hen house. He is smart enough to know he will not win in a fight against Bowser because of Bowser’s size and strength. 
Reddy Fox is definitely not as clever as Old man Coyote. But we cannot say he isn’t clever. He is a quick thinking fox with fine red fur and bushy tail. He is outsmarted by Blacky the crowand tricked into helping Bowser. 
Blacky the Crow is a kind hearted and cunning crow. He only gives compliments if he wants something back which shows he has a cheeky side. He helped Bowser get to a farm house and kept him safe while making plans using his outstanding intellect to get him back to Farmer Brown. 
The story begins in the woods near Farmer Brown’s farm. When Bowser is lost it takes us to another forest. 
The story is about Bowser getting tricked into following Old Man Coyote and getting lost. He has to find his way home. Along the way he is helped by different kinds of animals and learns about life outside of the farm and how to survive. 
This story has an important moral: Don’t let pride make you act before you think because you can get yourself into trouble. It also teaches us the importance of not giving up. 
I think this book is well written with an interesting plot and amazing setting. I also enjoyed the way they described the actions of the characters because I could imagine it like a movie playing in my head. 
The book is very exciting, especially during Blackys plan and when Reddy Fox has to run away from Bowser from the far away farm house to Farmer Brown’s farm house. 
The author uses many descriptive and interesting words. For example, when he is telling us Bowser is tired he doesn’t just say Bowser is tired, he tells us how tired and what is happening around him. I also enjoyed the little moral quotes by Bowser at the beginning of each chapter. 
There are a few detailed, black and white illustrations in the book. They are effective in contributing to the story because you can get a better picture of what the characters and the setting looks like. 
I would recommend this book because it has a complex and detailed plot with interesting characters that have peculiar personalities. This made it a very enjoyable read. 
I would recommend this book for all ages from 5 to 105! Especially those who enjoy animal adventure stories. 
[ Year 3 ] Megan LouisWriting Review
[ Student: Megan Louis ]
Book Summary 

1.      The title of this book is “Bowser the Hound”, and the author of the book is Thorton W. Burgess. 

2.      This type of narrative is a fictious, adventurous story which teaches real life lessons to anyone who reads it. 

3.   The main characters of this story are – Bowser the Hound, Farmer Brown’s boy, Reddy Fox, Blacky the Crow and Old Man Coyote.

      Bowser is the main character. The specialty of Bowser is that he is a very lively, energetic and wise dog who is not amused by clever tricks made by Old Man Coyote and Reddy Fox. He also has an attitude that he is a bit serious and doesn’t get fooled easily. Another one of the characters in the story is Farmer Brown’s Boy. The specialty of Farmer Brown’s Boy is that he is a passionate and kind master to Bowser, and Bowser is very fond of him. The other character is Reddy Fox. The specialty of Reddy is that he is very cautious, careful and thinks ahead before he does anything. He is also very smart and wise. Another characters in the story is Blacky the Crow and the specialty of Blacky is that he kindly showed Bowser theway home, wisely outwitted Reddy Fox and secretly knew when to be sly and crafty and frank and outspoken whenever talking to others. The final main character of the story is Old Man Coyote. He was the main villain, and the specialty of him, is that he is full of sneaky tricks, is very cunning and is a very clever old sinner. His main intention was to get rid of Bowser, because he thought Bowser was very annoying, and Old Man Coyote hated him very much. Old Man Coyote also made all the people worry and wonder about Bowser, by losing him in the forest on purpose.

4.      The story is set in a countryside, near a farmhouse surrounded by the Green Forest and the Old Pasture. The farmhouse has a lot of animals and a henhouse filled with fat hens doing their work. The Old Pasture has a very steep bank and when Bowser ran to the edge of it absent minded, he landed all of a sudden with a thump! That was when Bowser struggled to get out of the bank and follow Old Man Coyote’s trail all the way to Farmer Brown’s. Meanwhile, in the henhouse, countless hens are busy in their cages, and are aware of threats such as Reddy Fox and Old Man Coyote, who plan to devour them whenever they got a chance.

5.      The story is about the adventures of Bowser the Hound, the attitudes and behaviors of unique characters and also explains interesting morals and sayings related to the story. These morals teach lessons we can understand and remember whenever we are in different situations and circumstances. An example could be: “People who think they are fooling others very often discover that they are fooling themselves.” In this situation, Reddy tries to outwit Blacky, by pretending to be very feeble. But unfortunately, Blacky was a very wise and intelligent fellow, so he didn’t get fooled at all. Also, at the end of the story, Blacky outwitted Reddy by secretly hoping that Reddy would lead Bowser back home.

6.      Yes, each of the chapters have a moral. One of the best morals I think is: “Dishonesty will run away, where honesty will boldly stay.” This moral means that when you are dishonest, you will eventually be caught; dishonesty never pays you, but when you’re honest, you tell the truth. This moral is in chapter 36 when Reddy Fox was being chased by Bowser the Hound, and was running with a stolen fat hen on his shoulders. During the chase, when Bowser was out of sight, Reddy got the opportunity to hide this hen in the hollow stump, and escape without notice. But ultimately he never got to eat the hen because it was stolen by an eagle, Mr Goshawk.
 
2. Personal Opinion

 1. Yes, the book is written well. Each chapter has a quote which helps in reflecting the virtues that one must have. This adds more value to the narration of the story. The book is written well because it is understood by both children and adults alike.  It is a captivating story. The dialogue from the characters helps us understand what they are thinking, feeling and acting. The characters also have different emotions such as wise, ruthless, contented, suspicious and sometimes worried.

2. Yes, the book is exciting because it has lots of descriptions, storytelling and few illustrations which keeps the reader engaged to know what happens next. It has 42 chapters, each adding interesting features about the story, and that helps children enjoy the book as they read them.

3. Yes, the author used very interesting words to describe each of the characters and their behaviors. Some of the words are: “persistent” which is used to describe Bowser, because he was very focused in the chase of Old Man Coyote, “inclined” was used to describe Reddy Fox because he was looking forward to investigate the disappearance of Bowser the Hound,  “tantalizing” was used to describe Old Man Coyote’s scent as he lead Bowser away, because he was teasing Bowser by showing his good scent, but was keeping it out of reach, “impudent” was used to describe Blacky’s personality during daylight because he was very mischievous, naughty and finally, “errand” was used to explain that Farmer Brown’s Boy had a short journey to undertake.

4. Yes, there are 3 pictures in the book. One of the illustrations was about Reddy fox approaching to the henhouse, another illustration was about Bowser limping his way on the path to an unknown farmhouse hoping to get some food and help and the last illustration was about Mr. Goshawk holding the fat hen Reddy had hidden in the tree trunk, with his claws. The illustrations were effective in contributing to the story because they add more value to the narration, and helps picturize the story in our minds, especially to the children who are new to read chapter books.

5. Yes, I would recommend this book because the story has many descriptions, interesting words, morals and unique characteristics, attitudes, reactions and behaviors of characters. The adventures of Bowser the Hound are also very captivating, brilliant and fantastic. The story mainly keeps the reader engaged and eager to read the more.

6. I would recommend this novel to kids of all ages, parents, teachers and also other adults because it has 42 awesome morals.  Because of it’s moral’s, the story becomes realistic, and also brings the circumstances in the story a situation or teaching you might face in the future. It also teaches us how to react at the right time. One of the morals are: “When things are at their very worst, as bad as you think they can be, just lay aside your feelings sad; the road ahead may turn, you see.” This teaches us that when you feel things are very bad, don’t feel worried; they might change. When Bowser was utterly lonesome, hurt, famished and weak, after his fall at the edge of the cliff; he didn’t give up hope. After he found his way back up the bank, and went inside sugar camp, sleeping on the hay. After sometime, Blacky the Crow came to his rescue, and was kind enough to unite Bowser back to his family.
[ Year 2 ] Yiguo ChenWriting Review
[ Student: Yiguo Chen ]
The title of the novel I read last term is The Story of Peter Pan. The author who wrote this wonderful story is J. M.  Barrie. My novel book also has some lovely illustrations that help me imagine the story even better. The person who drew these pictures is Alice B. Woodward.

The main characters in the story are Peter Pan, who is a boy who never wants to grow up, and Wendy Darling, who is very good at telling stories. Her younger brothers, John and Michael, also have a big part in the adventure. We can’t forget Tinker Bell, the feisty little fairy, and the scary pirate captain, Captain Hook! Plus, there are the Lost Boys, who live in Neverland with Peter.

The story is about Peter Pan visiting the Darling children in their house one night. He teaches Wendy, John, and Michael how to fly, and they all go on an amazing trip to a magical island called Neverland. In Neverland, they have all sorts of exciting adventures with fairies, mermaids, and even battles with Captain Hook and his pirate crew. It’s a land where you can stay a kid forever if you want!

I think the special message in the story is about how wonderful it is to be a child and to use your imagination. It also shows the bond of friendship between Peter, Wendy, and the Lost Boys, and even though growing up is part of life, it’s important to keep some of that childlike wonder in your heart.

The part of the story I enjoyed the most was when Peter Pan first took Wendy and her brothers flying from their home to Neverland. Imagining them soaring through the night sky, past the stars, with Tinker Bell lighting their way, felt so magical and exciting! It made me feel like anything could happen. I wish I was one of them! 

I think this novel book would be great and wonderful for children who love adventures, magic, and stories about faraway lands. If you like characters who can fly and outsmart bad guys, and if you sometimes wish you could stay young forever, then you would probably really enjoy reading The Story of Peter Pan!